You See This is Bad

Kathy Rees
Jan 7, 2021

It’s everywhere. Paragraphs starting with “You See”. Sentences in videos starting with “You See”.

I presume that you are going to explain your line of logic or arguments for a point of view in your article, that’s why I’m reading.

I don’t see when you tell me “You See” because you haven’t explained anything yet.

Those two words, degrade your whole paragraph.

Punch me in the face with a fact, your emotion, your experience. Don’t soften it with “You See”.

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Kathy Rees

Writing about business, retirement, personal finance, life, health. Masters of Health Science Health Admin Undergrad Criminology. Writing Fiction finally.